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My Childhood :) Ten years ago i was 10th years old. I have a unique experience. My hobby is playing with my friends. One day I ask to my friends to play in the rice field. We have a plan to find snails. The rice field is not far from my home. Its about 20 m. So, we decide to go on foot. My friend asked me to walking first. Then I'm agree about that. I take my first step on the rice field. But suddenly my left leg fall into another rice field. So, My body got turn into black with thick mud. But I dont know why my friend just laughing at me. Then they are join me to fall into the rice field. This is my childhood memory :)

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My Childhood :)

Ten years ago I was 10 years old. I had a unique experience. My hobby was playing with my friends. One day I asked my friends to play in the rice field. We had a plan to find snails. The rice field was not far from my home, it was about 20 meters. So we decided to go on foot.
My friend asked me to walk in first, and I agreed. I took my first step into the rice field. But suddenly my left leg fell into another rice field and my body became black and covered with thick mud. But I didn't know why my friends were laughing at me. Then they all joined me and fell into the rice field too. 

This is my childhood memory :)

 

(Everything is in past tense because it is a memory from the past, stick with that tense for most verbs)

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