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Brazil World Cup 2014 In the last weeks, I had an opportunity to follow the World Cup in Brazil. Even with all the pessimism about the organization, the stadiums and the violence in the big cities hosts of the games, it was a great success : the players, the goals, brazilians and tourists supports the event to become the "Cup of the Cups'. Unfortunately, the World Champion isn't Brazil, but Germany deserves it. Now, after all the party, the focus of brazilian population is the election for president : it's time to choose the best candidate.

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Brazil World Cup 2014

In the last few weeks, I had an opportunity to follow the World Cup in Brazil. Even with all the pessimism about the organization, the stadiums and the violence in the big cities hosts of which hosted the games, it was a great success: the players, the goals, Brazilians and tourists supports supported the event to become the "Cup of the Cups'. Unfortunately, the World Champion isn't Brazil, but Germany deserves it. Now, after all the partying, the focus of the Brazilian population is the election for president presidential election: it's time to choose the best candidate.

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Brazil World Cup 2014

[In the last weeks],(É um POUCO melhor dizer: "Over the past few weeks" - a palavra "over" implica um duração de tempo) I had an opportunity to follow the World Cup in Brazil. Even with all of the pessimism about the organization, the stadiums and the violence in the big cities hosting the games, it was a great success: the players, the goals, brazilians and tourists supported (está conjugando o verbo para um conjunto, não só um) the event to become the "Cup of the Cups'. Unfortunately, the World Champion isn't Brazil, but Germany deserves it. Now, after all the party (ou você pode dizer: "Now, after all of the partying"), the focus of brazilian population is the election for president : it's time to choose the best candidate.

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Obrigado. Amanhã vou escrever alguns textos! Escreva alguns em português também para que eu possa corrigir :)
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Eu fiz algumas correções MAS é LEGAL! Tem coisas muito intermediárias :) bom trabalho!

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