Fireworks
Yesterday on July 14th, it was National Day in France. It was a free day for every French.I went to see the fireworks which took place on the beach.Even if I am getting older I am still amazed and delighted when I look at fireworks. Then at this moment, I say to myself that there are as many lignts in the sky as in my eyes!
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Fireworks
Yesterday on July 14th, it was National Day in France. It was a free day for everyone in France French. I went to see the fireworks which took place on the beach. Even though if I am getting older I am still amazed and delighted when I look at fireworks. Then In that this moment, I said say to myself, that 'there are as many lights lignts in the sky as are in my eyes!'
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Fireworks
Yesterday on July 14th, it was National Day in France. It was a free day for every French person. I went to see the fireworks which took place on the beach. Even if I am getting older I am still amazed and delighted when I look at fireworks. Then At this that moment, I say to myself that there are as many lignts in the sky as in my eyes!
Very well written. Français can be translated as Frenchman, but French person is better if the gender is not specific.
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Thank you Toru :) I'm always happy to learn with you about US language .
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In the US, we would call a "free day" either a "day off" or a "holiday".
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