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a movie that makes me cry I advert you this is a spoiler!!! Some day ago I saw a movie called "Ernest and Celestine". It is a french cartoon. It talks about the friendship between a little mouse named Celestine and a big bear named Ernest. Celestine live in the city of the mice, that is underground and is full of service, she grows up listening stories about bad and horrible bears that eat mice but she doesn't believe in them. One night she goes in the city of the bears that is in the surface, looking for new teeth. After a bad moment in which she risks to be killed, she meets Ernest. He is a "busker", he plays music on the road for money or food. At the first moment Ermest wants to eat Celestine, becaus he's hungry, but she convices him not to do showing him a candy store. Gone back to home, the dentist (teeth have great importance for mice) reproaches Celestine and she have to go to the bear's city again looking for a large amount of teeth. Ernest and Celestine meet again; because he emptied the shop policemen want to arrest him, then she helps him to run away, and the bear helps her to collect teeth and to bring them to the mice's city. But in the morning the mice discover the great sleeping bear and because of the fearfull stories the panic is general. Celestine and Ernest escape and refuge in the Ernest's home. At the beginning, they have some problem, but after a while they begin to love each other. But the other bears and mice hate their loving friendship because it is unnatural, and they are captured and processed. The two processes become grotesque, until a fire devastates the courts, and everybody escape except Ernest and Celestine, which save the two judges. This fact revealed to bears and mice that they are the real unnatural, while the strange couple is united only by love. And could live together happily ever after! The movie is direct and feelings are simple. It gives you a sense of tenderness, empathy for the couple. I hope that one day, in the real life, "bears and mice" could live their love without any problems. I think that everybody have to see it!

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a movie that makes me cry

I advert warn you this is a has spoilers!!!
Some day time ago I saw a movie called "Ernest and Celestine". It is a french cartoon. It talks about the friendship between a little mouse named Celestine and a big bear named Ernest. Celestine lived in the city of the mice mice city, that is underground and is (full of service) Not sure what you meant to say. sShe grows up listening to stories about bad and horrible bears that eat mice, but she doesn't believe in them. One night, she goes in the city of the bears that is in the bear city that is on the surface, looking for new teeth. After a bad moment in which she risks to be where she is almost killed, she meets Ernest. He is a "busker", he plays music on the road for money or food. At the first moment Ermest wants to eat Celestine because he's hungry, but she convices him not to do by showing him a candy store. After going Gone back to home, the dentist (teeth have great importance for mice) reproaches approaches Celestine and she have to makes her go to the bear's city again looking for a large amount of teeth. Ernest and Celestine meet again. bBecause he Earnest emptied the candy shop, the policemen want to arrest him. then she Celestine helps him to run away, and the bear helps her to collect teeth and to bring them back to the mice's city. But in the morning the mice discover the great sleeping bear, and because of the fearful stories they panic is general. Celestine and Ernest escape and take refuge in the Ernest's home. At the beginning, they have some problem issues getting along, but after a while they begin to love each other. But t The other bears and mice hate their loving friendship because it is unnatural, and they are captured and processed detained. The two processes become grotesque not sure what you were trying to say here. until A fire devastates the courts, and everybodyone escapes except Ernest and Celestine, which save the two judges. This fact revealed to shows bears and mice that they are the real unnatural ones. while the strange couple is Celestine and Earnest are united only by love, and could live together happily ever after!
The movie is direct and feelings are simple. It gives you a sense of tenderness, empathy for the couple. I hope that one day, in the real life, "bears and mice" could live show their love without any problems. I think that everybodyone should have to see it!

 

Overall very good work. I hope this helps. Ciao!

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me too:)
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waiting for your corrections! :)

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