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Please Check My Sentences. Thank You!
I am planning to choose a hotel to stay during my trip.
I need to ask some questions. Please check_below. Thank you.
I would like to stay at your hotel for four nights.
Your room looks really nice and comfortable.
I am going to stay at the " " hotel before attending my friend's wedding ceremony.
I want to go to your house from the hotel on foot.
Do you think it is possible?
I checked your address on your page, but each web site under 'A' on 'Google maps' shows different places.
Could you tell me where your nearest hotel is so I am able to know where to go.
Thank you. :)
Please check my sentences. Thank you!
I am planning to choose a place to stay during my traveling. (Hotel could be used here but that's extremely specific to only staying in a hotel. Your original statement feels like you're wanting to say something a little more broud to imply a place to stay)
I need to ask some questions. Please check as below. Thank you.
I would like to stay at your place during my travel for 4 nights. (Same as above. I presume you're renting a room during your stay from someone renting them out short term?)
Your room looks really nice and comfortable. (よくできました)
I am going to stay the hotel " " on the 3rd to join a my friend's wedding ceremony so,
I need to get to your place from the hotel on foot. (I tried to maintain the orginal structure of thought for you as best I could. The first half of this sentence was well structured, except for the 3rd being typed improperly. Need also carries a better meaning here. Since you're shopping for a place to stay, it's very appropriate and not rude at all to express a direct need instead of what you want. "I want to get to your place on foot" sounds like it's something you want to do right this moment, rather than an option you need if you're going to rent a room from someone. You could also say "by walking" but that feels stiff. To get somewhere "on foot" feels much better.)
Is that an option? ("Do you think it is possible?" again feels way too stiff. If you're shopping, you're looking for options and possibilities so try shopping with those in mind. "That" is understood in this sentence to refer to the topic at hand or previously mentioned.)
I checked your address on your page but each web site, 'A' and 'Google map' point to different places.
Could you please tell me your nearest hotel? so I am able to know where. (It sounds like "A" is a search engine service that can give you directions? In that case it would be said as stated here. "so I know where" is already understood and not needed for the sentence. If you really feel you need to express that thought separately, try saying "so I know where to go.")
Hope this helps!
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