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my new life plan when i was a child ,my dream was to be a scientist.I also want to be a doctor ,police, FBI and some others what we knew them from the tv or books. With my grew up , my dream was change ,when i in my high school , i want to be a white-collar worker,i think that is my really life,i study hard for going to a better college ,because a better college has more opportunites to get a good job,but unlucky ,i just gone to an ordinary university.i just is a very very ordinary girl,i dont have any skills,like sing ,dance and so on , so my college was dull. NOW ,i have already work two years,it means i have end my student's life, so i should plan my new life , i like english , travel,make friends , Beacuse i have a steady job ,so i make a plan ,every year i would go have a travel by myself or with my best friends,in the Future ,i want to go to other countrys then every day i would take one hour to study english in skype or other learning platform, i was sure to be a english speaker,

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My New Life Plan

When I was a child, my dream was to be a scientist. I also wanted to be a doctor , a policeman, an FBI agent and some others what we that I knew them from the TV or books.
With my When I  was growing grew up , my dream was changed ,when I was in my high school , I wanted to be a white-collar worker,I think thought that is was my ideal  really life. ,I studied y hard for going to get into  a better college ,because a better college has more opportunites to get a good job.,but Unluckily ,I just gone went to an ordinary university.I am  just is a very very ordinary girl,i dont have any skills,like singing ,dancing e and so on , so my college was dull.
NOW ,i have already been working for two years,it means I have ended my student's life, so I should plan my new life. , I like English , travel, and making make friends ,
Beacuse I have a steady job ,so I  can make a plan ,every year I will would go have a travel by myself or with my best friends.,In the future ,I want to go to other countries. ys
Then every day I would take one hour to study English on skype or another learning platform, and I will i was be sure to be an English speaker.,

 

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