Summer times
Summer is evidently different from other seasons,especially winter, temperature is the mainly different feature that we can feel.
During the summer time, the temperature is higher than other seasons，sometimes it rises to 40℃ and more especially in the countries near equator.
I think the count of people who like summer would never less than other seasons ,and the young take important fraction account for it,because they can wear more loose and comfortable,and go out to take part in their favorite hobbies.
Despite of the strong ultraviolet could sunburn their skin,but the young are eager to participate games under the hot sun in school campuses in this time of nowadays.
Help me to correct,thanks very much.
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Summertime times
Summer is evidently different from other seasons,especially winter, the temperature is the main difference feature that we can feel/that can be felt.
During the summertime, the temperature is higher than other seasons，sometimes it rises to 40℃ and more especially in the countries near equator.
I think the count amount of people who like summer would never be less than those who prefer other seasons ,and the young take important up a major fraction account for of it,because they can wear more loose and comfortable clothes,and go out to take part in their favorite hobbies.
Despite of the strong ultraviolet rays that could sunburn their skin,but the young are eager to participate in games under the hot sun in school campuses in this time of nowadays.
Help me to correct,thanks very much.
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