A very sad wedding.
Rowden and Leizel were a happy couple. But last month they discovered that Rowden was sick and they couldn't have a normal wedding. So they had to do the wedding in the hospital. Everyone was very sad. Rowden died less than 10 hours after his wedding.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eVocnNIgKwY
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A very sad wedding.
Rowden and Leizel were a happy couple. But last month they discovered that Rowden was sick and they couldn't have a normal wedding. So they had to celebrate the wedding/it at the hospital. Everyone was very sad. Rowden died less than 10 hours after his wedding.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eVocnNIgKwY
"Do" es muy general, mientras que "celebrate" suena mejor en este caso ya que una boda se supone que es una celebración (para mí es un fastidio mayormente...). Para lugares como hospital, airport, bus station, university, school, etc. se usa la preposición "at". Por lo demás perfecto. A ver que dicen los expertos nativos.
Saludos desde España
PD: que historia más triste, no? xD
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A very sad wedding.
Rowden and Leizel were a happy couple. But last month they discovered that Rowden was sick and they couldn't have a normal wedding. So they had to have the wedding in the hospital. Everyone was very sad. Rowden died less than 10 hours after his wedding.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eVocnNIgKwY
Well written. A very sad story.
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Yes, I read about this story in FB and saw some photos. The groom suffered from cancer.
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This is so sad story,true love... Till death.
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