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Girfriend and language talten 女朋友和语言天赋 我现在在值班。 I‘m on duty now . 明天我要去一个蛮远的地方。因为我女朋友在那儿工作。虽然她大学的专业是商务英语,但现在却干了林业。我估摸着是种树、砍树或者除虫之类的工作,又或许是和外国人谈点买树卖树之类的生意,不是很确定。 I'm will go to a distant place Tomorrow. cuz my girlfriend working there. Although she majored in business English in university, but now she is a forestry cadres. I guess it's plant trees, cut down a tree or catch bugs such jobs.or maybe, She is talk about buy or sell tree with foreign businessmen,some thing like that, I'm not sure of that. 她对我的英文水平不屑一顾,我叫她教我,她也不教,她认为我学不好,不够聪明。 She laugh at my English, I beg she teach me, and she not. she say I will no learn good, not smart enough. 其实我是很有语言天赋的(我猜)。我在南京住过一段时间,当我离开南京的时候,我的南京话已经让出租车司机听不出来我不是本地人了。 In fact, I am very has the language talent (I guess). I lived in Nanjing for a long time, when I leave Nanjing, my nanjing language has let the taxi driver listen to not to come out I am not a native. 希望我英语也能学好。 Hope I can learn English well.

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Girfriend and language talten 女朋友和语言天赋

我现在在值班。
I‘m on duty now .

明天我要去一个蛮远的地方。因为我女朋友在那儿工作。虽然她大学的专业是商务英语,但现在却干了林业。我估摸着是种树、砍树或者除虫之类的工作,又或许是和外国人谈点买树卖树之类的生意,不是很确定。

I'm will go to a distant place Tomorrow. cuz my girlfriend working there to visit my girlfriend ( or cause she's working there ). Although she majored in business English in university ( she is a bachelor of Business English ), but now she is a forestry cadres. I guess it's plant trees, cut down a tree or catch bugs such jobs.or maybe,( her work is planting trees, cutting down trees or catching bugs, maybe ). u must be kidding, haha, though i dunno what "forestry cadres" is, too. :"> She is talk about buy or sell she talk she is buying and selling ( purchasing )tree with foreign businessmen,some thing like that, I'm not sure of that.

她对我的英文水平不屑一顾,我叫她教我,她也不教,她认为我学不好,不够聪明。

She laugh at my English, I beg she her for teaching me, and she not but she doesn't. she say I will no learn good, not smart enough.   ( she said i wouldn't learn English well, cause i was not smart enough. )

其实我是很有语言天赋的(我猜)。我在南京住过一段时间,当我离开南京的时候,我的南京话已经让出租车司机听不出来我不是本地人了。

In fact, I am very has the language talent i have much potential on learning a language (I guess). I lived in Nanjing for a long time, when I leave left Nanjing, my nanjing accent made the taxi driver thought that i was a local. / mistake me for a local.

希望我英语也能学好。

Hope I can learn English well.
Jia you!!!!!!!!!!
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Girfriend and language talten talent女朋友和语言天赋

我现在在值班。
I'm on duty now .

明天我要去一个蛮远的地方。因为我女朋友在那儿工作。虽然她大学的专业是商务英语,但现在却干了林业。我估摸着是种树、砍树或者除虫之类的工作,又或许是和外国人谈点买树卖树之类的生意,不是很确定。

I'm will go to a distant place tomorrow, cuz my girlfriend is working there. Although she majored in business English in university, but now she is a forestry cadres. (altought和but 不同时出现在一个句子里,这是一个中英表达的差异)I guess it's planting trees, cuting down a trees or catching bugs or such  kinds of jobs.Or, maybe, She is (doing business with foreign business,只是我的想法)talking about buy or selling  tree with foreign businessmen,or something like that. I'm not sure of that.

她对我的英文水平不屑一顾,我叫她教我,她也不教,她认为我学不好,不够聪明。

She laughs at my English, I beg ask her she to teach me, and but she doesn't not. She says I will not learn good well, cuz I am not smart enough.

其实我是很有语言天赋的(我猜)。我在南京住过一段时间,当我离开南京的时候,我的南京话已经让出租车司机听不出来我不是本地人了。

In fact, I am very has   have the language talent (I am talented in learning languages)(I guess). I lived in Nanjing for a long time.When I leave left Nanjing, my nanjing language   accent has let the taxi driver (thought I am a local nanjingese)listen to not to come out I am not a native. 

希望我英语也能学好。

Hope I can learn English well.


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Girfriend and language talten 女朋友和语言天赋

我现在在值班。
I‘m on duty now .

明天我要去一个蛮远的地方。因为我女朋友在那儿工作。虽然她大学的专业是商务英语,但现在却干了林业。我估摸着是种树、砍树或者除虫之类的工作,又或许是和外国人谈点买树卖树之类的生意,不是很确定。

I'm will go to a distant place Tomorrow. cuz my girlfriend working there. Although she majored in business English in university, but now she is a forestry cadres. I guess it's plant trees, cut down a tree or catch bugs such jobs.or maybe, She is talk about buy or sell tree with foreign businessmen,some thing like that, I'm not sure of that.

她对我的英文水平不屑一顾,我叫她教我,她也不教,她认为我学不好,不够聪明。

She laugh at my English, I beg she teach me, and she not. she say I will no learn good, not smart enough.

其实我是很有语言天赋的(我猜)。我在南京住过一段时间,当我离开南京的时候,我的南京话已经让出租车司机听不出来我不是本地人了。

In fact, I am very has the language talent (I guess). I lived in Nanjing for a long time, when I leave Nanjing, my nanjing language has let the taxi driver listen to not to come out I am not a native.

希望我英语也能学好。

Hope I can learn English well.



Hey, dude, your English is OK......Actually, people my age and don't talk like that, but when I'm talking to a younger person...what the hell...why not.

I have corrected your English in two ways. First, I corrected your grammar, etc, trying to stick to the same words you used.  The I put the passage into my own words, the way I would say it....白话.  Here goes.

I'm on duty now. Tomorrow I have to go to a distant place because my girlfriend works there. Although her university major was Commercial English, now she has something to do with forestry. I guess it's  work dealing with planting trees, chopping down trees or pest control or some such thing. 
Or maybe it's a job with foreigners discussing buying and selling trees or some such thing. I'm not sure.
 
She doesn't think much of my English proficiency. I asked her to teach me, but she didn't. She doesn't think that I can learn, that I'm not smart enough, Actually I have a talent for languages (I guess). I lived for a while in Nanjing. When I left Nanjing a taxi driver could not tell from my Nanjing dialect that I was not a local person. I hope I can learn English well.
 


I'm on duty now. Tomorrow I have to take a long trip to where my girlfriend works. Although her major in college was Commercial English, now she's doing some kind of work connected with forestry. I suppose it deals with planting trees, chopping them down, pest control or some such thing.  Or maybe it's some kind of work dealing with foreigners I'm not sure.
 
She doesn't think much of the way I speak English. I asked her to teach me but she refused. She doesn't think that I could learn, that I'm not smart enough. 
 
Actually, I have a talent for languages (I guess). I lived for a while in Nanjing. When I left Nanjing a taxi driver couldn't tell, from the way I spoke the Nanjing dialect, that I wasn't a local person.
 
I hope I can learn to speak English proficiently.
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wish she were, haha
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