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Innocence's notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi,everybody. I am the person who like playing basketball,watching movies,listening to the music and singing songs.When you ask who is my favorite singer, my answer will absolutely be Avril. I like classical and rock music.Singing songs and communicating with others make me happy. I wanna make friends,and learn from each other!

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Hi　everybody. I am the person who like playing basketball,　watching movies,　listening to the music and singing songs.  I like classical and rock music. 


I moved "I like classical and rock music" up one sentence because I think it makes more sense here to talk about your favorite music and then your favorite singer.

When you If you (were to) ask who is my favorite singer is, my answer will absolutely be Avril.

It is better to say "If you were to" instead of "when you," as it is not guaranteed that a person will ask you that question. In most cases you cannot presume that they will ask that question, and so it is more proper to say "if" than "when"

 Singing songs and communicating with others make me happy.  I wanna make friends and (we can) learn from each other!

For the last sentence "I wanna make friends and learn from each other!," the second part of the sentence must have a plural subject, as it would not be proper to say "I learn from each other," with a singular subject. "Each other" implies that there is more than one person and some action is being reciprocated between two sides. It must be something like "They (or we, in your case) can learn from each other."


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Great! And don't be discouraged by corrections. The most important factor in making progress while learning any language is to USE IT! Write, read, talk, listen...and make plenty of mistakes! Mistakes are a great source of knowledge. ^-^
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I thnk you re in the right place)
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Good!hehe

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