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Why don't we go to the zoo? Zoos invest part of its revenues on protecting animal species, but they also need money to keep the animals inside them in good conditions. Do you think zoos are really necessary to protect animals? What would you think about an organization if they would take one person of every race on earth, and put those people into cages so that other people could pay to see them? And what about if that organization would invest part of its revenues on protecting human rights? Wouldn't it be something absolutely crazy? Have you ever thought about this?

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Why don't we go to the zoo?

Zoos invest part of THEIR REVENUE IN THE PROTECTION OF animal species. (Better without the BUT) They also need money to keep the animals inside  THE ZOO  in good CONDITION.
Do you think zoos are really necessary to protect animals?

What would you think about an organization if they TOOK one person FROM EACH race on earth and put THEM into cages so that other people could pay to see them?
And what about if that organization INVESTED part of its REVENUE  on protecting human rights?
Wouldn't it be something absolutely crazy?

Have you ever thought about this? ....

 

Quite a few people I would not be too unhappy to see in a cage, however if it were for the purpose of preservation of the human race maybe one person in each cage wouldn't do the trick ?

 

 

 

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Why don't we go to the zoo?

Zoos invest part of their revenues on protecting animal species, but they also need money to keep the animals inside them in good conditions.
Do you think zoos are really necessary to protect animals?

What would you think about an organization if they would take one person of every race on earth, and put those people into cages so that other people could pay to see them? This sounds like episodes of the Twilight Zone and Star Trek and the book Slaughterhouse Five.
And what about if that organization would invest part of its revenues on protecting human rights?
Wouldn't it be something absolutely crazy? or Science Fiction or not so much Fiction.

Have you ever thought about this?

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I just wanted to say that I absolutely agree iwth you about keeping the animals in cages. Humans don't have a right to keep wild animals in cages! I also hate circuses and feel really bad for all the poor animals!
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I'd really appreciate it if someone could correct my writing. Please could someone also tell me if something on it sounds strange?

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