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A little angry I think I will never understand some people, I mean, their way of acting. I know we are a lot of us, and everyone has a different way of thinking but I think that all of us are supposed to be nice with the other, even more when you don't know the person very much or you are just a neighbour. There are some people that you talk to and they reply to you as they didn't like to have a word with you, and I don't understand why. Is because of this kind of things why I get a little angry. Well, what I've just written is not very "well- built" and maybe the comas aren't in a good place or something like that but I've just written what is going on inside of my head right now.

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A little angry

I think I will never understand some people, I mean, their way of acting.
I know there are a lot of us, and everyone has a different way of thinking but I think that all of us are supposed to be nice to each other, even more so when you don't know the person very much or you are just a neighbour.
There are some people that you talk to and they reply to you as if they didn't want to say a word to you, and I don't understand why. It's because of this kind of things that I get a little angry.
Well, what I've just written is not very "well- built" and maybe the commas aren't in the right place or something like that but I've just written what is going on inside of my head right now.

 

Well done--I understood everything you were saying even when I changed some of the words. And I agree--that makes me angry too!

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A little angry

I think I will never understand some people, I mean, THE WAY THEY BEHAVE
I know   THERE ARE MANY OF US and everyone has a different way of thinking but I think (don't need the that ) all of us are supposed to be nice TO EACH other, even more  SO when you don't know the person very WELL or you are just a neighbour.
There are some people that you talk to and they reply (don't need the to you) as IF they didn't like to have a word with you and I don't understand why. IT is because of this kind of thing (don't need the why) I get a little angry.
Well, what I've just written is not very "well- built" and maybe the comas aren't in THE CORRECT PLACES or something like that but I've just written what is going on inside (don't need the of) my head right now. ...

 

ps ... I agree with the thoughts & feelings you express ! ... 

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Thank you very much for all of your comments :) It makes you happy knowing that there are some persons that read what you write :)
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Hello Laura, You're right... unfortunately many people aren't nice at all and there will always be people like that... just don't pay attention to them, ignore them, that's it... If you like to talk about anything, I can be a friend ! ... have a good night!
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I really like what you've written!

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