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A sunny sunday Hi guys! I describe you my sunny sunday. :) This morning I woke up at 10.30am and I had breakfast with my mom in the terrace. Then I chatted with my linguistic partners on this site and I helped my mom to prepare the sunday's philipino lunch. My italian friend called me and we spoke for a few minutes at the phone. I had lunch with my parents and my cousin and we ate ice cream after lunch. Now I'm chatting with some linguistic partners on italki and after that I'll take a shower because the temperature of this sunday is very high. After my shower and before the dinner I'll drive to bring my cousin at work. Thanks for the corrections.

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A sunny Sunday

Hi guys! I will describe to you my sunny Sunday. :)
This morning I woke up at 10.30am and (I) had breakfast with my mom on the terrace. Then I chatted with my linguistic (language) partners on this site and (I) helped my mom (to) prepare the Sunday's Philipino lunch. My Italian friend called me and we spoke for a few minutes on the phone. I had lunch with my parents and my cousin and we ate ice cream after lunch. Now I'm chatting with some linguistic (language) partners on italki and after that I'll take a shower because the temperature of this Sunday is very high. After my shower and before dinner I'll drive to bring my cousin to work.

Thanks for the corrections.

 

Great job! A few problems with prepositions (on/in/to) and capitalization (we always capitalize nationalities like Philipino and Italian and days of the week). The word linguistic is too formal for everyday coversation. We would say "language partners". Keep up the good work!

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