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Learning English Hello! My name is Erasmo, I'm from Brazil and I've been studying English for 1 year. I've a plan that i can make a fluent speaker in English until the end of the Year. It's possible?. I'm Studying Listenin everyday and talk with strangers in chats.

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Learning English

Hello!
My name is Erasmo, I'm from Brazil and I've been studying English for 1 year. I plan to become a fluent English speaker by the end of the Year. Is it possible?
I'm studying, listening and talking to strangers in chats everyday.

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Hi Erasmo! You have an awesome name! What you've written is very good, and if you study hard I'm sure a year can get you to an advanced level! However, there are some mistakes which I will correct.

Spelling/grammar errors are in yellow, while wording mistakes are in green and corrections are in blue.

 

Learning English

Hello!
My name is Erasmo; I'm from Brazil and I've been studying English for 1 year. I've a plan that i can make a fluent speaker in English until the end of the Year.

 

Correction: "My plan is to be a fluent speaker in English by the end of the year."

 

It's possible?.

 

Correction: "Is it possible?", "Is this possible?", or "Do you think it's possible?"

("It's = "It is" which is the wrong order for a question unless you are expressing shock or disbelief, or if you want clarification. For example, if I said, "Lets fly directly from San Francisco to Paris," you might, if you were surprised and though it wasn't possible, say, "It's possible?")

 

I'm studying and listening everyday, and talking with strangers in chats.

 

Overall, great job! Even if you got some things wrong, any English speaker would understand what you're saying! :)

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Learning English

Hello!
My name is Erasmo, I'm from Brazil and I've been studying English for 1 year. I have a plan that I can become a fluent speaker in English by the end of the year. Is it possible?
I'm studying and listening everyday and chat with strangers.

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Hey Erasmo, I won't correct your entry since Raphael did a great job already. I think if you really immerse yourself in the language you can be "fluent" by the end of the year. It will take a lot of work but it is definitely possible! Don't give up. Its reasonable to expect being able to understand 80% of the words after a year of diligent study. Fortunately for you, most English speakers can be quite lazy and will use the simplest terms to communicate! Good luck!

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