Will and Timing

Success is just an equation of will and timing!
If you want something, take it! If you need it, fight for it .. There will be obstacles, may be but don't let them stop you.
(Make " Forward " is the only direction) (Moving forwards is the only option). It's to be or not to be.

Once you knew know your goal, start (working towards it straight away) (achieving it immediately). (Deeds matter, not words).

(Perfection is to make it harmonious - I don't quite know how to re-write this bit, I don't fully understand what you mean),

(We must do the right deeds, at the right time, in the right way.) (right deeds at right timing in the right way.)

Notes -full stops, commas etc come straight after words, there is no space. What you wrote makes sense, but it's not always natural English. I have given better options in brackets.