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My favorite foreign film A foreign film that I enjoy watching is a cartoon film called despicable me. It’s about how a bad person becomes a good father, at first, he has a devil plan which is steal the moon to earn lots of money, and because of this, he don’t have much time to company with his kids. Finally, he gives up his plan and becoming a good father, living a happy life with his children. This film was very famous last year and I think there are reasons for that. Firstly, it’s a comedy film, and there are some devil but cute minions in this film. Secondly, it tells us that every person has a good side, even bad person. Besides, it also teachs us that love can change people a lot. So, when I feel tired or struggled with my study, I will watch this film, and release my pressure, having a good mood.

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My favorite foreign film

A foreign film that I enjoy watching is a cartoon film called Despicable Me. It’s about how a bad person becomes a good father. At first, he has a devilish plan which is to steal the moon in order to earn lots of money, and because of this, he don’t doesn't have much time to company be with his kids. Finally, he He finally gives up his plan and in favor of becoming a good father and living a happy life with his children. This film was very famous popular last year and I think there are many reasons for that why. Firstly, it’s a comedy film a very funny movie, and there are it has some devil but devilishly cute minions characters in this film. Secondly, it tells us that every person has a good side, even a bad person. Besides, and it also teaches us that love can change people a lot. So, when I feel tired or struggled with my study, I will watch this film, and to release my pressure, having and have a good mood.

 

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