TATANIC---a good film
I finished watching the old film TATANIC----the love story between Rose and Jack.It is really a good movie,and I can not help spending three hours on it although I am so tired and sleepy.
what is love?and how can we express our love?
I got ill recently and my nose bleeded this evening,I feel scary as I stay home alone,I wrote this in my QQ description,to my great surprise,S found it and asked me at once"are u ok?"----I was stunned!! I did not know whether I should reply,I told him"it is ok",but the fact is that I felt quite uncomfortable~ I am not a suitable friend for him,so I do not like him to worry about me~it is better that I overcome all the difficulties by myself!and I will.
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TATANIC---a good film
I finished watching the old film Titantic----the love story between Rose and Jack. It is a really good movie, and I can not help spending three hours watching it although I am so tired and sleepy.What is love, and how can we express our love?
I became ill recently and my nose bled this evening. I felt scared as I stay home alone. I wrote this in my QQ status, and to my great surprise, S found it and asked me at once "Are u ok?"----I was stunned! I did not know whether I should reply or not. I told him, "It is ok," but the truth was that I felt quite uncomfortable~ I am not a suitable friend for him, so I do not want him worrying about me~ It is better that I overcome all the difficulties by myself, and I will!
Some of your tenses and grammar is wrong, yet, impressive!
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曾经沧海难为水 除却巫山不是云
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