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An interesting animal A time when I saw an interesting animal is when I was a kid, I often saw a famous cartoon called Banbi, which was about a deer’s adventure. He always helps others, and he is brave, smart, as well as humorous. This cartoon impressed me a lot in my childhood, and I also thought deers gave me many fantasy. You know, when I saw the deer at Christmas Day, I often thought of Santa Claus, it seems like he would came to me and give me gifts by riding deers. However, when I grow up, and one day I went to zoo to see the real deer, I felt so disappointed about its appearance, which is really different with its look at cartoons. But, because I usually see deers at TV, I just tell myself the real deer is very cute and beautiful like that in cartoons.

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An interesting animal

A time when I saw an interesting animal is when I was a kid, I often saw a famous cartoon called Banbi, which was about a deer’s adventure. He always helps others, and he is brave and smart, as well as humorous. This cartoon impressed me a lot in my childhood, and I also thought deers gave me many fantasy.[What are you trying to say, here?] You know, whenever I saw the deer on Christmas Day, I often thought of Santa Claus. It seemed like he would came come to me and give me gifts by riding deers. However, when I growgrew up, and one day I went to zoo to see the real deer. I felt so disappointed about its appearance, which is really different with from its look atin cartoons. But, because I usually see deers at on TV, I just tell myself the real deer is very cute and beautiful like that in cartoons.

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An interesting animal

A time when I saw an interesting animal is when I was a kid. I often saw a famous cartoon called Bambi, which was about a deer’s adventures. He always helped others, and he was brave, smart, as well as humorous. This cartoon impressed me a lot in my childhood, and I also thought deers gave me many fantasies. You know, when I saw the deer at on Christmas Day, I often thought of Santa Claus. It seemed like he would come to me and give me gifts by riding his reindeers. However, when I grew up, and one day I went to the zoo to see the a real deer, I felt so disappointed about its appearance, which is really different with its look at from how it looks in cartoons. But, because I usually see deers at on TV, I just tell myself the real deer is very cute and beautiful like that in cartoons.

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