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04-07-2014
Since i was a little girl, i really hated the rainy day. In 2013, i got to UK. Now it has been nearly one year and i do like walking in the rain~ weird~ but~happy~ things always move on~
Every since I was a little girl, I really hated rainy days. I moved to the UK ((United Kingdom) in 2013. It has been nearly one year now and even though it rains a lot, I still enjoy walking in the rain! I know this sounds weird, but I am happy! Life goes on.
The last part doesn't make sense. Be careful of your punctuation. The ~~~~~~ is not used.
04-07-2014
Since I was a little girl, I really hated the rainy days. In 2013, I got came to the UK. Now it has been nearly one year and I do like walking in the rain; weird, but happy. Things always move on.
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