Improved my English!

Hey,

My last notebook entry was written a long time ago, so I have decided to write a new one. I don't have interesting things to talk about. However, a notebook entry is meant to practice the language you're learning and not to entertain people (I guess).

I have received an A (The grades in my country are different, so I don't know if I have said that right) for my English oral test! Tomorrow I will go shopping with a friend! We will have a lunch in our favorite pub and I'm going to buy sport shoes. I'm also reading an English book! "The fault in our stars" written by "John Green". It's a really nice book and I understand it better than I thought I would. I have gone/(I went) to the hairdresser and I like my new short hairstyle. This summer holiday my parents and I will go on vacation to 'Corpus'. That's a museum where you can walk through the human body! (picture below) I have improved my English! I now only look up a few words.

Have a nice day! GREAT JOB, some spelling errors, some word choice and word preference changes. Also, when you change tense between past, future, and present remember to use signalling words like "yesterday, today, tomorrow. Your writing was completely understandable, it would just flow better with those signifiers.