My likes

I like animals, riding a bike, and roller blading.
I also like reading. And I have written my own book. It's a fairy tale tail. My little sister Stacy reads it. And I want to translate this book into English.
I and Stacy and I  love drawing and painting. We do it often a lot. We make pictures for my book,. and we are going to make cartoons.
I like eating very much, :D and I like cooking too! XD

My likes:

I like animals, riding a bike, and roller blading.
I like reading. And I write am writing/ have written my own book. It's a fairy tail tale. My little sister Stacy reads it. And I want to translate this book into English.
I and Stacy and I love drawing and painting. We do it a lot. We make pictures for my book. And we are going to make cartoons.
I like eating very much :D I like cooking too! XD

Note: Try connecting your sentences to make them flow. Or add phrases at the beginning of sentences to make them connect.

Instead of "I like reading. I have written my own book. It is a fairy tale." say "I like reading. In fact, I have written my own book of fairy tales."

My likes

I like animals, riding a bike, and roller blading.
I like reading. And I'm writing my own book. It's a fairy tale. My little sister Stacy reads it. And I want to translate this book into English.
Stacy and I love drawing and painting. We do it a lot. We make pictures for my book. And we are going to make cartoons.
I like eating very much. :D I like cooking too! XD