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My Hometown Chengdu My summer vacation begins, so I can spend more time on italki. This time I'd love to introduce some attractive scenic spots in Chengdu. First, Tianfu Square, it's the center of Chengdu. The statue of chairman Mao and the exhibition hall stand on the square. As is known to all, hotpot is the most famous dish in Sichuan province. Yuanyang hotpot refers to the wok which has been partitioned into two parts by a thin metal plate. One part is filled with traditional hotpot soup and the other is full of non-hot-spicy broth. According to the picture, it is clear that the outline of Tianfu Square looks like a yuanyang hotpot.

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My Hometown Chengdu

My summer vacation begins, so I can spend more time on italki.
This time I'd love to introduce some attractive scenic spots in Chengdu.
First, Tianfu Square, it's the center of Chengdu. The statue of chairman Mao and the exhibition hall stand on the square. As it is known to all, hotpot is the most famous dish in Sichuan province. Yuanyang hotpot refers to the wok which has been partitioned into two parts by a thin metal plate. One part is filled with traditional hotpot soup and the other is full of non-hot-spicy*** broth. According to the picture, it is clear that looks as if the outline of Tianfu Square looks like is a yuanyang hotpot.

 

***instead of "non-hot-spicy" you can say non-spicy or (preferably) mild

Mild can mean a few different things, but I think it would be understood in this sentence. Non-spicy would be more specific and detailed, but also less professional sounding. 

 

This is really well written, you know English well! It was also very interesting to read! Great job!

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