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Aranjuez I think Aranjuez is the most beautiful place in Madrid. I have never been to Aranjuez, but I hope I can go there this year. What I like the most is the garden. There are some stone statues and some stone fountains and sometimes, the nature is stronger and covers all. That is the reason that I love the gardens that no one looks after. There is a beautiful special place: the "Estanque de los Chinescos". I only have seen that in photos, but I know it'll be my favourite place. There are three buildings of three different cultures. One is from Greece, other is Chinese and the last one is an Egyptian mausoleum. I think the best season to see the lake is in fall, because each tree has a different coulour: red, brown, green and yellow. It also exists a palace, The Royal Palace of Aranjuez. King Carlos III ordered to build it in 1561. Along the time, there were many reconstructions because of fires and abandonments. Nowadays, you can visit inside the palace and see some fancy rooms like Isabel II's room or "el salón del trono". I have to talk about music, too. Joaquín Rodrigo composed a beautiful melody inspired by Aranjuez and called "The Aranjuez Concert". Paco de Lucía played a guitar version and it's one of my favourite classical songs. Have you ever listen to it? Well, now, I hope you want to visit Aranjuez as much as I want. =) (This picture is " El Estanque de los Chinescos", by Pablo Arias López:)

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Aranjuez

I think Aranjuez is the most beautiful place in Madrid. Although I have never been to Aranjuez, there, but I hope I can go there sometime this year. What I like the most is the its garden. There are some several stone statues and some stone fountains that are completely covered by vegetation and sometimes, the nature is stronger and covers all. the fact that  that is the reason that I love the gardens that no one looks after them is the reason I love these gardens.

There is a beautiful special place called the "Estanque de los Chinescos" which I only have only seen that in photos, but I know it'll will be my favourite place in the park. There are three buildings in the typical style of  three different cultures. One is in the Greek style, from Greece, another is Chinese and the last one is an Egyptian mausoleum. I think the best season to see the lake is in the fall, because each tree has a different coulour: red, brown, green and yellow.

It also exists has a palace, The Royal Palace of Aranjuez, that King Carlos III ordered to have built it in 1561. Along the Over time, there were many reconstructions because of due to fires and having been abandoned. abandonments. Nowadays, you can visit inside the palace and to see some fancy rooms like Isabel II's room or "el salón del trono".

I have to talk about mention the music, too (better:also). Joaquín Rodrigo composed a beautiful melody inspired by Aranjuez and called "The Aranjuez Concert". Paco de Lucía played a guitar version and it's one of my favourite classical songs. Have you ever listen to heard it?

Well, now, I hope you want to visit Aranjuez as much as I do want. =)


(This picture is " El Estanque de los Chinescos", by Pablo Arias López:)

Well done María!  Although it may look like I have made a lot of changes and corrections to your article, the truth is it was well written and completely understandable.  My changes simply make it sound more natural to an English speaker.  Keep up your good work and I hope that this helps you.  ¡Saludos desde Canadá!

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Aranjuez

I think Aranjuez is the most beautiful place in Madrid. I have never been to Aranjuez, but I hope I can go there this year. What I like the most is the garden. There are some stone statues and some stone fountains and sometimes, the nature is stronger and covers all. That is the reason that I love the gardens that no one looks after.

There is a beautiful special place: the "Estanque de los Chinescos". I only have seen that in photos, but I know it'll be my favourite place. There are three buildings of three different cultures. One is from Greece, other is Chinese and the last one is an Egyptian mausoleum. I think the best season to see the lake is in fall, because each tree has a different coulour: red, brown, green and yellow.

It also exists There is also a palace, The Royal Palace of Aranjuez. King Carlos III ordered to build it it built in 1561. Along Around the time, there were many reconstructions because of fires and abandonments. Nowadays, you can visit inside the palace and see some fancy rooms like Isabel II's room or "el salón del trono".

I have to talk about music, too. Joaquín Rodrigo composed a beautiful melody inspired by Aranjuez and called "The Aranjuez Concert". Paco de Lucía played a guitar version and it's one of my favourite classical songs. Have you ever listen to it?

Well, now, I hope you want to visit Aranjuez as much as I want. =)


(This picture is " El Estanque de los Chinescos", by Pablo Arias López:)

 

This is very good, there are parts that could be said differently in english, but are perfectly ok and understandable as they are so I have only highlighted the main problems.

 

And yes, I love Rodrigo's Aranjuez Concerto and his Recuerdos de la alhambra as well.  :)

 

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