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please help me to correct my pharagraph!!!! Today, fast food and street food are popular all over the world in general and Vietnam in particular. however, according to my finding, very rare street food in Ha Tinh. According to people here, using street food will be very harmful for health, because of dust, car fumes, dirt and many reasons related to safety foodst people here are often used food in restaurant or homemade. Different from Ha Tinh, one of the features of Hue is street food. Hue is estimated as 1 in 3 provinces having diverse, rich and delicious street food in Vietnam. you can easily find street food in any street in Hue. street food is usually fish soup, beef noodles, sticky rice, tea, rice cakes... food can be sold in place, with the tiny colorful table and knee high, chair is tiny and low like primary school children's. Or maybe you have to eat without seats because they are vendors. According to people here, street foods are nutritious, delicious and cheap. In addition, you can eat fast or carry away if you like.

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Please Help Me to Correct my Paragraph pharagraph!!!!

Today, fast food and street food are popular all over the world in general and in Vietnam in particular. However, according to my findings, this is  very rare street food in Ha Tinh. According to people here, using eating street food will be is very harmful to your for health, because of dust, car fumes, dirt ( you could just say pollution) and many other reasons. related to safety foodst
people here are often used food in restaurant or homemade.
Different from to Ha Tinh, one of the features of Hue is street food. Hue is estimated as the 1 in 3 provinces having diverse, rich and delicious street food in Vietnam. You can easily find street food in any street in Hue. Street food is usually fish soup, beef noodles, sticky rice, tea, and rice cakes... Food can be sold anywhere in place, with at the tiny, colorful, knee high tables and knee high, with chairs is tiny and  as low as those used in  like primary schools.  children's. Or maybe you have to eat  standing up without seats because they are vendors.
According to people here, street foods are nutritious, delicious and cheap. In addition, you can eat fast quickly or carry take it away if you like.

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please help me to correct my pharagraph!!!!

Today, fast food and street food are popular all over the world in general and Vietnam in particular. however, according to my finding, there is very rare little street food in Ha Tinh.

According to people here, using eating street food will be is very harmful for to your health, because of dust, car fumes, dirt and many reasons related to food safety foodst
people here are often used eat food in restaurants or homemade food.

Different from Ha Tinh, one of the features of Hue is street food. Better to say: "In Hue, one of the features that is different from Ha Tinh is street food."

Hue is estimated as to be 1 in of 3 provinces having that has diverse, rich and delicious street food in Vietnam. you can easily find street food in any street in Hue. street food is usually fish soup, beef noodles, sticky rice, tea, rice cakes...

food can be sold in place shops?, with the tiny, knee-high colorful tables and knee high, and chair is tiny and low chairs like those of primary school children's.

Or maybe you have to eat without seats because they are vendors.
According to people here, street foods are nutritious, delicious and cheap.

In addition, you can eat fast or carry away if you like.

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