a story ...correct please

there(There) was a girl who needed so bad to travel(to travel so badly) a round(around is one word) the world(.) maybe(Maybe she wanted to travel) because she went(wanted) to found(find) here self(herself) or to forgot(forget) her life where she was born. she(She) started her journey by visiting Paris(.)
she(She) didn't know French for a while she felt scared but after a weak(week) that she spent it (she spent a week there), she found that 

it's kind of excited(exciting) to wander in(down the) streets(. She) had nothing but a smile in(on) her face. some times(Sometimes,) people stopped her to said(say) something but she didn't understand(.) she(She) just gave them a bright smile (that) make(made) them wonder if she an angel or just an idiot. in(On) her third day in Paris she started to write in a dairy and that(this) was what she write(wrote,) "i(I) feel a free like a bird(.) it's(It's) wonderful how i(I) can enjoy my life here without talking to the people(.) i(I) only point for(to) what i(I) want in the market and (in) the coffee shop i(I) hear the songs (that) i(I) don't understand any word(, but) i(I) found(find) my self(myself) jumping and dancing how a(with) joy." months(Months) later, she found herself understand(ing) the people. it(It) was like she was blind and know(now) she can(could) see and the old feeling returned to her so she packed her bags and takes(took) the first fly(flight) to Italy to started(all) over again in a place where she can dance in(to) a song she can't understand.

Don't forget that all sentences start with capitals and that i is always capital in English when by itself. Also, I don't understand why you talked about her third day in Paris, after you said she spent a week there. Not a bad start! Most of your mistakes were really tiny and minor details that you can easily fix.

A story ...correct please

There was a girl who needed wantedso bad to travel a round around the world very much. Maybe because she went wanted to found find here self herself or to forgot forget her life where she was born. She started her journey by visiting Paris. 

She didn't know French for a while, so she felt scared but after a weak (weak is an adjective) week that she spent it in France, she found that
it's kind of excited exciting to wander in the streets had with nothing but a smile in on her face. Some times people stopped her to said say something but she didn't understand, so she just gave them a bright smile to make them wonder if she is an angel or just an idiot . in On her third day in Paris, she started to write in a dairy diary.and that was what In the diary, she write wrote ( " i feel a I feel free like a bird. It's wonderful how I can enjoy my life here without talking to the people. I only have to point for at what I want in the markets and the coffee shops.  i hear the songs When I listen to the music, I don't understand any word, however I found my self myself jumping and dancing how a with joy." ) Months later she found her self herself understanding what the people were saying. Before, it was like she was blind but now,and know she can see. and The old feeling returned to her so she packed her bags and takes took the first fly flight to Italy to started over again in a place where she can dance in a song she can't understand.