Celebration
The last weekend I was my birthday.
That day I celebrated with my familiy.
Two days after my birthday, was my father's birthday, then we got together with our family for celebrate together.
The sunday arrived to my house, my best friend, who lives in other city. Then we ate and drank again in my house.
This yesterday I was a great celebration. I am very happy.
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Celebration
Last weekend I was my birthday. (We use definite articles way less in English!)
I celebrated the day with my familiy.
Two days after my birthday was my father's birthday, then we got together with our family to celebrate together.
Sunday my best friend who lives in another city arrived to my house. Then we ate and drank again in my house.
Yesterday was a great celebration. I am very happy.
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Celebration
The Last weekend, it was my birthday, which I celebrated with my familiy.
Two days after my birthday, it was my father's birthday, so we got together with our family to celebrate together.
On Sunday, my best friend, who lives in another city, arrived at my house, my best friend, who lives in other city. Then we ate and drank again in my house.
This Yesterday, it was a great celebration. I am very happy.
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Happy Birthday then! :D (maybe a bit too late)
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