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A Nice Performance
Last Saturday, my sister and I went to a famed famous theatre in Saigon to watch a music show. I would say that this was the first time I had a chance to go there for fun.
Spending more than a half of life expectancy doing a lot of things, I have missed many things others, including watching a live music show. What a terrible mistake it was in my life.
That day, in addition to enjoying favorite songs, there were other things that made me surprise surprised me. The audiences wore more behaved beautifully. They were very nice to others. During the performance, I didn’t hear any noises from people surrounding me. They stayed very quiet to enjoy the show completely.
Then When the show ended, we returned to the parking lot to pick get our motorbike. When we operated tried to start the motor, oh, my God, it didn’t function at all. We stood in the yard of the theatre and tried to fix the problem, but there was nothing we could do. Suddenly, an older woman sitting near us came toward us, and did a favor for us by asking a security guard helping to help us. In the end, we went home safely.
The live show was very exciting. Two of thirds of the audience were female. I assume that women often like soft music and romantic and figurative lyrics. I had a good sleep and sweet dreams after that.
'did some things, missed others'. So 'others' is just a common abbreviationn for 'other things'.
Otherwise just minor changes to words!
Yes you need to get out more, CD!
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