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good night Hi people how are you? well today was a hot day without so much rain, I feel that I miss the rain, because I used to see so much rain the past years. I feel global warming is changing the weather and is doing the rain goes away from my zone, but anyway, I hope that we get enough rain this season that will probably in October, even my grand mother remember that it's used to rain all the year, even in December. the most important thing is to get rain for the fields and not to get those long rains, I don't know how to explain them but they are long, because it could rain all day or two days, I didn't pay attention to the weather until now, ok bye for now, good night everybody

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Good Evening Titles are capitalised for every word, except connectives. It's more common to say "Good Evening" if you are going to continue saying something. People may be confused with the word "Goonight", which is a way of saying you are going to bed or leaving for the night. "Good night" is very rarely used, unless as a question like this: "Good night?"

Hi people how are you? Well, today was a hot day without much rain, I miss the rain, because it has rained so much in the past few years.


I feel global warming is changing the weather and is making the rain go away from my area. Anyway, I hope that we get enough rain this season that it will even rain in October, my Grandmother remembers that it used to rain all year, even in December.


The most important thing is to have rain for the fields but not to have it rain for too long. I don't know how to explain it, but they it can rain for too long. I haven't paid attention to the weather until now. OK bye for now, goodnight everybody

 

I think I understood what you meant about the rains; you want it to rain, but not so much that it floods the fields and ruins the crops. We have a phrase in English "The rains in Spain fall mainly on the plain", which comes from "My Fair Lady"...your note reminded me of this and I thought you'd like to hear about an English phrase! Well done!

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Good Evening!

Hello everyone - while 'Hi people' makes sense, I've never heard anyone say this. Most people start messages with 'hello everyone...'

How are you? Well, today was a hot day without so much rain. I miss the rain, because it has rained so much these past few years. - 'Today was a hot day' and 'I miss the rain' are two seperate statements, so they work best as two seperate sentences. 

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So, do you want it to rain now or later?

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