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We lost Today I feel very very sad, because my team (Chile) lost against Brazil in the FIFA world cup. I was very nervous before and during the game and when my team scored a goal, I jumped with happiness, then it was minutes of much nervousness for both team. Before to start the game, I (and many people in Chile) was very worried about the referee, because everybody feared that his work on the court is not fair or same for both team, because the FIFA is a corrupt association, but this not happened and the referee did a good job. In the minute 120 my team almost scored but the ball hit with the crossbar!!!... Then in the penalties, we lost.. I want to cry, but I am very very very proud of my team, they played with the heart and the soul !!, and I sure that the next American Cup 2015 will be our, because this will be in Chile and we will have a rematch and again show the world the great team they are and we the best fans in the world.

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We lost

Today I feel very very sad, because my team (Chile) lost against Brazil in the FIFA world cup. I was very nervous before and during the game and when my team scored a goal, I jumped with happiness. Then it was there were minutes of much nervousness for both teams. Before to the start (or beginning) of the game, I (and many people in Chile) was very worried about the referee; because everybody feared that his work on the court would not be fair or the same for both teams, because the FIFA is a corrupt association, but this did not happened and the referee did a good job.

In the 120th (pronounced "one hundred twentieth") minute 120 my team almost scored but the ball hit with the crossbar!!!... Then in the penalties, we lost.. I want to cry, but I am very very very proud of my team, they played with the heart and the soul !!, and I am sure that the next American Cup 2015 will be ours, because this it will be in Chile and we will have a rematch and again show the world the great team that they are and that we are the best fans in the world.

 

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I didn't see them play today, but I think I saw the game between them and Australia earlier.  I hope to see them play again in the future.  And I hope these corrections are helpful to you.  Well done!

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