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Globalisation Nowadays, the globalisation is something real. Wherever we go, there are the same shops, the same restaurants, the same music... Is this good? Many people are afraid of losting their culture and I am afraid too. On the one hand, it's good because all we're connected on Internet and television and we can travel around the world without moving. But on the other hand, the typical food, the clothes or the behaviour towards the life of a particular place is losting. I don't want to travel to other country and to see the same things that I found in mine. I want to travel and discover things that I've never seen and to feel that there are many people who are differents. These things makes the human better.

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Globalisation

Nowadays, the globalisation is something real. Wherever we go, there are the same shops, the same restaurants, the same music... Is this good?

Many people are afraid of losting their culture and I am afraid too. On the one hand, it's good because all we're all connected on the Internet and on television and we can travel around the world without moving. But on the other hand, the typical food, the clothes or the behaviour towards the way of life of a particular place is getting losting.

I don't want to travel to another country and to see the same things that I found in mine. I want to travel and discover things that I've never seen and to feel that there are many people who are differents. These things makes the a human better.

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Thank you very much! =)
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Hello Maria. The only thing I can add to Nel's correction below is to use a different word instead of 'typical' in the context of your sentence. In your sentence it would be better to say "The distinctive food, clothes, and way of life of a particular place is getting lost". I agree, by the way. :)

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