About At the cloudy weather

Today I woke up at 5.30 am when it was cloudy outside. I didn't want to wake up, but I needed to go to work. I took a bath and ate breakfast before I went. I went to my office by bus, but I needed to walk about 5 minutes from my home to the bus stop. And then I needed about a hour to arrive at my office with mass transit. Now.. here I am.. sitting behind the computer with a boring job everyday. This is my story for this morning, please help me to correct it. Thank you. :D

Hi Merissa - Your English is very understandable, which is great, but you changed from present tense to past tenses a lot.  We would use past tense for the things that are done.  Be careful with your contractions - the ' goes in the space where you took the letters out.  Did not = didn't  When you want to emphasize your words (Now here I am) you would not use a contraction, because the contraction is more casual.  "Wanna" is slang, and would only be written if you were capturing dialog or very, very casual writing like a SMS text.  Very good, keep on writing!

one day with a cloudy weather

Today I woke up at 5.30 am. It is cloudy. I didn't want to wake up, but I need to go to work. I took a bath and breakfast before going. I went to my office by bus, but I needed to walk for about 5 minutes from my home to bus stop. And then it took about a hour to arrive at my office. Now here I'm sitting behind the computer with a bore job. This is my story of this morning, please help me correct it. Thank you. :D