Hi, this is a short story about me drawing a bird. XD

I have so much free time now that we are on vacation, but it's fine because I want to start drawing again. I've lost so much practice.  A few days ago I drew a bird, and while i was drawing it, I couldn't stop thinking of my grandma; she used to have many birds. My mom loves birds too, and so do l, but I think (that) if you love someone or an animal you shouldn't keep it in a cage. Well, I would/will never do that to something or someone I love. 
I want you to see my drawing :D, hope you like it! 

That is an amazing drawing!  I wish I had talent like yours, haha. 

I would like to give you some general advice. Make sure you don't leave a space between your last word and your commas. This is a comma mistake made by Spanish speakers because of the keyboard. I do it in Spanish too! Be careful though because it looks funny to an American. 

You need to work on learning what constitutes a full sentence in English; when you need to put in a period and start a new sentence with a capital letter at the beginning. Once you have a noun and a verb you can continue your sentence by connecting new sentence with "and" or "but" however, you can NOT just connect full English sentences with just commas or a series of dots. This is also a very common mistake for Spanish speakers in English. 

Make sure to capitalize your "I"s. 

The past tense of to draw is drew... not drawed. To draw is an irregular verb. 

I think it would be more helpful to you to go back and correct these things yourself rather than my doing that for you. You might want to do that and post your own correction first and then we can correct what is left???

That is a BEAUTIFUL drawing.