Good morning!
The weather is fine today, the sun shines. A little birdie singing her song sitting on the branch near me. In that moments you just really enjoy all around. By the way, today is the second day of working week. There are so many business I must to do! But i dreaming about blue water of highland lakes and freshness young green grass. Maybe i should go swimming tonight.
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Good morning!
The weather is fine today, the sun shines. A little birdie singing her song is sitting on the branch near me. In that these moments you just really enjoy all everything around. By the way, today is the second day of the working week. There are is so many much business I must to do! But i I am dreaming about the blue water of highland lakes and freshness of young green grass. Maybe i I should go swimming tonight.
Well done! Your writing is poetic at points :D. Three grammar notes:
(1) the pronoun "I" is always capitalized in English
(2) "business" is singular, so you needed to use the singular adjective "much" rather than "many"
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Good morning!
The weather is fine today, the sun is shinesing. A little birdie is singing her song, whilst (or while) sitting on the branch near me. In that these moments you just really enjoy all everything around. By the way, today is the second day of the working week. There are so many business things I must to do, but i'm dreaming about the blue water of highland lakes and freshness young green grass. Maybe i should go swimming tonight.
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Very poetic, minor errors. Over all it is a beautiful notebook entry! :)
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