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Hi ,a girl said to you ( five ) Today', the weather was sunny .The sky was so clean that you couldn't see any cloud .In a word .that was good for weather.Yesterday , I bought a stewpot , which made me too excited . To be honest, I hold the stewpot ,felt that the world food all in my hand.. For the first time ,I made the soup , radish and pork ribs . Stewing it for two hours ,sprinkled it with salt and aginomoto when it was finished. That's tasting delicious ! Now, I began to dream becoming a first -class kitchener one day ! Above all, had soup ; had love ;had family . That 's wonderful !

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Hi ,a girl said to you ( five )

Today the weather was sunny .The sky was clean and you couldn't see any cloud. It was good weather.

Yesterday I bought a stewpot, which made me so excited . To be honest when I hold the stewpot ,I feel like I hold all the worlds food in my hand.

 The first time I made the soup was with radish and pork ribs. I stewed it for two hours and sprinkled it with salt and aginomoto when it was finished.

That tastes delicious!

Now I begin to dream about becoming a first-class cook(chef?) one day! 
Above all, I had soup, I had love and I had family . That 's wonderful !

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Hi ,a girl said to you ( five )

Today, the weather was sunny .The sky was so cleanr that you couldn't see any clouds. In a word  .that was good for the weather was good (If you want to describe the weather in a single word?). Yesterday , I bought a stewpot , which made me too I'm really excited with . To be honest, when I held the stewpot , I felt that all the world's food all in my hand. For the first time,  I made radish and pork ribs soup , radish and pork ribs for the first time . I stewed it for two hours, and  sprinkled it with salt and aginomoto when it was finished. That's It tasteding delicious ! Now, I began to dream of becoming a first -class kitchener  chef (here, kitchener generally means an oven, or occasionally is used for someone who is in charge of the kitchen - like a manager) one day !
Above all, had soup ; had love ;had family . That 's wonderful !

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