Learn a new language

Hello everyone, my name is Natalia and I really expect to improve my English.

Esta linea es correcta, pero, en conversación, dirías "I want to improve my English." 

"Expect" es como esperando.  Usando "Want" aquí es mejor porque expresas un deseo.

People from Chile speak Spanish and for me is too difficult to find a partner language and practice.

También esto es bueno porque lo entendía.  Pero la correcta forma es:

People from Chile speak Spanish, but, for me, it's difficult to find a language partner to practice with.

I know that practice makes the master and for that reason I am here. I expect to learn more than I know and make friends.

Practice makes perfect.

Thank you for reading me.

Thank you for reading this.

Great job Natalia.  To me, the most important part for someone learning a new language is to be understood.  Don't worry about the little things until later.

Learning a New Language

Hello everyone. My name is Natalia and I am really hoping to improve my English.
People from Chile speak Spanish and, consequently, it is very difficult to find a language partner with whom to practice English.

I know that practice makes perfect and, for that reason, I am here. I expect to enhance my knowledge of the English language and make friends in the process.

 
Thank you for reading my notebook entry.

Nicely done, Natalia.

Learn a new language

Hello everyone, my name is Natalia and I really expect to improve my English. 

People from Chile speak Spanish and it is very difficult for me to find a language partner to practice with.
I know that practice makes the master and for that reason I am here. I expect to learn more than I know and to make friends.
Thank you for reading me.

^^Thank you for reading.  I believe that is what you wanted to say.

I would personally say practice makes perfect, but i got what you were trying to say!

Learn a new language

Hello everyone, my name is Natalia and I really expect to improve my English.
People from Chile speak Spanish and for me it is too difficult to find a language partner and practice.
I know that practice makes perfect (idiomatic expression) and for that reason I am here. I expect to learn more than I know and make friends.
Thank you for reading my journal.

Learn a new language

Hello everyone, my name is Natalia and I really expect to improve my English.
People from Chile speak Spanish and for me is too difficult to find a  language partnerand to practice with.
I know that practice makes the master  prefect and for that reason I am here. I expect to learn more than I know and to make friends.
Thank you for reading my article.

Hope you can improve your English quckily~ :)