我悲傷的旋律 (Melody of sorrow)
我今天覺得念中文很無聊，所以我剛剛決定寫一首歌。它還需要加強，但是我迫不及待地想完成它。我在譜曲的時候，寫了一段關於它的故事。
I got bored of studying today, so I decided to write a song instead. I’ve got to fix a lot of it, but I got impatient. When I was writing it, I thought of a story for it.
我完成歌曲和影片後，把它上傳到了Youtube以及Youku.
After I finished the song and video, I uploaded it onto Youtube and Youku.
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjI4MzkxNjMy.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDd0sUCCQSc
它是關於一位十分寂寞的年輕男人，他獨自一人住在一個非常遙遠的星球上，直到有一天，他在路上偶然地碰到一個舊的外星人的收音機，於是他將收音機調到一個有少女的聲音的播送頻道。
It's about a young man who lives on a faraway planet, completely alone, until one day, he stumbles on an old radio and manages to tune into a broadcast of a maiden’s voice.
經過幾個月中，他仔細地聽著她說的每個字，猶如寶石般珍惜每一句歌詞。那個聲音裡帶有一種微微憂鬱的口氣，引起了那個男人的共鳴。
Over the course of several months, he listens to her every word intently, treasuring each one like a precious jewel. The voice is tinged with a faint note of melancholy which resonates with the young man.
後來，他愛上她，不管要花多少時間，他決定要找尋她。但是實際上，那個收音機的訊號經過了多光年的時間才到達他住在的行星，令人悲傷的是：她很久以前就去世了，不可能接受他的感情
Over time, he falls in love and resolves to search her out and find her, no matter how long it takes. However, the radio transmissions took light years to reach his planet, and the sad reality is that she's long since passed away. Unrequited love…
希望你們能享受我的故事與歌。。。
Hope you enjoyed my story and song…
尚恩, Shaun
Search from various English teachers...
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正在感受这段旋律，唯美浸着伤感，还有勇敢地爱.
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hey.i also know another small story similar like this.just one sentence
you like the light of one star.but dont you know that when the light reached here it already died for a long time.
i hope i can translate much better.
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haw haw .Although I don't go to your webside to listen your song,the story is very funny ! that is very creative .
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我悲傷的旋律 (Melody of sorrow)
我今天I got bored of studying today, so I decided to write a song instead. I’ve got to fix a lot of it, but I got impatient. When I was writing it, I thought of a story for it.
我完成歌曲和影片後，把它上傳到了Youtube以及Youku.
After I finished the song and video, I uploaded it onto Youtube and Youku.
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjI4MzkxNjMy.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDd0sUCCQSc
它是關於一位十分寂寞的年輕男人的故事，他獨自一人住在一個非常遙遠的星球上，直到有一天，他在路上偶然
It's about a young man who lives on a faraway planet, completely alone, until one day, he stumbles on an old radio and manages to tune into a broadcast of a maiden’s voice.
Over the course of several months, he listens to her every word intently, treasuring each one like a precious jewel. The voice is tinged with a faint note of melancholy which resonates with the young man.
後來，他愛上了她，他决定不管
Over time, he falls in love and resolves to search her out and find her, no matter how long it takes. However, the radio transmissions took light years to reach his planet, and the sad reality is that she's long since passed away. Unrequited love…
希望你們能享受我的故事與歌。。。
Hope you enjoyed my story and song…
尚恩, Shaun
我是按照英文意思翻译的，但我的英语水平也有限，可能有些句子没理解它的深刻含义。总体来讲，写的没什么错误，但是有些话还是觉得有点别扭，而且有几句话我看英文意思很简单，但是中文太文邹邹的，我就擅自改了，希望不会弄巧成拙。
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我悲傷的旋律 (Melody of sorrow)
我今天覺得念中文很無聊，所以我剛剛決定寫一首歌。它還需要加強，但是我迫不及待地想完成它。我在譜曲的時候，寫了一段關於它的故事。I got bored of studying today, so I decided to write a song instead. I’ve got to fix a lot of it, but I got impatient. When I was writing it, I thought of a story for it.
我完成歌曲和影片後，把它上傳到了Youtube以及Youku.
After I finished the song and video, I uploaded it onto Youtube and Youku.
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjI4MzkxNjMy.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDd0sUCCQSc
它是關於一位十分寂寞的年輕男人，他獨自一人住在一個非常遙遠的星球上，直到有一天，他在路上偶然地碰到一個舊的外星人的收音機，於是他將收音機調到一個有少女的聲音的播送頻道。
It's about a young man who lives on a faraway planet, completely alone, until one day, he stumbles on an old radio and manages to tune into a broadcast of a maiden’s voice.
經過幾個月中，他仔細地聽著她說的每個字，猶如寶石般珍惜每一句歌詞。那個聲音裡帶有一種微微憂鬱的口氣，引起了那個男人的共鳴。
Over the course of several months, he listens to her every word intently, treasuring each one like a precious jewel. The voice is tinged with a faint note of melancholy which resonates with the young man.
後來，他愛上了她，他决定不管
Over time, he falls in love and resolves to search her out and find her, no matter how long it takes. However, the radio transmissions took light years to reach his planet, and the sad reality is that she's long since passed away. Unrequited love…
希望你們能享受我的故事與歌。。。
Hope you enjoyed my story and song…
尚恩, Shaun
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