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Letter to a friend Hello Carol! It’s nice to read news about you. Young people in Spain is used to practice a lot of sport after the School classes. Also, the majority of the students prefer playing football because it is the main sport in the country. The TV news are ususally focus on football whereas forgets to talk about another traditional sports as athlethism. Here the same thing happens with posters of sport celebrities, above all with football celebrities like Cristiano Ronaldo from the Real Madrid F.C. because he is one of the main stars. My brother plays football in my town’s team so I have a wide variety of photos and videos. If you prefer watching a video you only need to visit this website: www.footballteamsp.es and let’s watch. I hope all this would be useful for your presentation. All the best, Ángel

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Letter to a friend

Hello Carol!

It was nice to read news about you. Young people in Spain are used to practicing a lot of sport after School classes.

Also, the majority of the students prefer playing football because it is the main sport in the country. The TV news (or "the news on TV") ususally focuses on football whereas it forgets to talk about other traditional sports such as athletics.

Here the same thing happens with posters of sport celebrities, above all with football celebrities like Cristiano Ronaldo from Real Madrid F.C. because he is one of the main stars.

My brother plays football in my town’s team so I have a wide variety of photos and videos. If you prefer watching a video you only need to visit this website: www.footballteamsp.es and then(?) watch.

I hope all this would be useful for your presentation.

All the best,

Ángel

 

I put "the news on TV" in brackets, as to me it sounds more natural than "TV news". However it may be a phrase other people use so i wouldn't want to delete it.

Your English is good :)

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Letter To A Friend.

Hello Carol!

It was nice to read the news about you. Young people in Spain are used to practicing a lot of sport after school.

A majority of students prefer playing football because it is the main sport in our country. The TV news ususally focuses on football, and forgets to talk about other traditional sports such as athletics.

The same thing happens here with posters of sports celebrities, more so with football celebrities like Cristiano Ronaldo from the Real Madrid F.C., because he is one of the main stars.

My brother plays football in my town’s team so I have a wide variety of photos and videos. If you would like to watch a video you only need to visit this website: www.footballteamsp.es and then you can watch some.

I hope all this will be useful for your presentation.

All the best,

Ángel

 

Pretty good writing mate.

Phil.

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