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Writting essay
You have received this letter from you English-speaking penfriend. Read the letter and write you reply:
Hi John!
Well, here in Spain, people go in beaches, but they also go to the mountains. A lot of people go abroad because they love (to) travel. They love to visit museums, monuments, and different cities in the countries they visit.
Now, I'm in Norway on my vacation. I'm exploring the country, relaxing, and meeting new people!
See you soon!
Víctor
Writting essay
You have received this letter from you your English-speaking penfriend. Read the letter and write you your reply:
Hi John!
Well, here in Spain, people go in to the beaches beach (you could say "people go to beaches", bIut we usually say "people go to the beach"), but also go to the mountains. A lot of people go abroad because they love to travel. They love to visit museums, monuments, and diferents different (there is no plural for the word different) cities from the countries where they go.
Now, I'm in Norway in my vacations on holiday ("on holiday" is the British way of saying this, and as I am British this is the correction I've used. You could say "on vacation" but this is an American way of saying this phrase but also correct, but the word vacation is rarely, if ever, used in the UK). I'm exploring the country, relaxing, and meeting new people!
See you soon!
Víctor
All in all a very well written paragraph. I'm very impressed
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