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Animal shelters Hi! Today I write about animal shelters. They have been popular last years and I think it's wonderful that people want to help animals. They are our friends, and we must take care for them. Have you ever visited an animal shelter? It's unhappy and somber. Animal are in jails as if they were going to run away. Animals only need care and love, and they always love you if you pay attencion in them. However, people don't understand that animals aren't a toy, and they use them to make rices, fights or whatever related to. Nowadays, abandoned and negleted animal are usuall on the streets, but sometimes we have supportive kind people who rescue and take care for them, or give them to some interested people. I have a salt and pepper two-year-old cat, "Tronchaditas". Her name it's strange, but I love him as if she was my sister. I pay attencion of him everytime she needs and she are always ready to love me when I'm sad. One time, she run away because she loves birds and insect and she saw one of them in my balcony. She jumpied outside my home and she was one night on the street. The following day, she appeared in front of my house. I think she missed me and she found the way to come back home. She is a clever cat. Related to what I have written, animals are considerete and kind with people, and we have to do the same with them.

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Animal shelters

Hi! Today I write about animal shelters. They have been popular last (in recent) years and I think it's wonderful that people want to help animals. They are our friends, and we must take care of  them.

Have you ever visited an animal shelter? It's unhappy and somber. Animals are in jails as if they were going to run away. Animals only need care and love, and they always love you if you pay attention to them. However, people don't understand that animals aren't a toy, and they use them to make races, fights or other unsafe amusements. Nowadays, abandoned and neglected animals are usually on the streets, but sometimes we have supportive kind people who rescue and take care of them, or give them to some interested people.
I have a salt and pepper two-year-old cat, "Tronchaditas". Her name it's strange, but I love her as if she were my sister. I pay attention to her everytime she needs something and she is always ready to love me when I'm sad. One time, she ran away because she loves birds and insects and she saw one of them on my balcony. She jumped outside my home and she was one night on the street. The following day, she appeared in front of my house. I think she missed me and she found the way to come back home. She is a clever cat.

Related to what I have written, animals are considerete and kind with people, and we have to do the same with them.
 
if she were my sister   el sujunctivo in ingles, esta aqui. pero muchas no lo usan, es verdad
 
i care for my cat  OR i take care of my cat
 
tenemos varios gatos pero lo ultimo debe quedarse afuera. mi hermana hacia "cat rescues"
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Animal shelters

Hi! Today I am writing about animal shelters. They have been popular the last couple years and I think it's wonderful that people want to help animals. They are our friends, and we must take care of them.

Have you ever visited an animal shelter? It's unhappy and somber. Animals are kept in jail like cages, as if they were going to run away. Animals only need care and love, and they always love you if you pay attention to them. However, people don't understand that animals are not toys, and they use them to run races, fights or whatever the animals can be related to. Nowadays, abandoned and neglected animals usually end up on the streets, but sometimes we have supportive kind people who rescue and take care of them, or give them to some other interested people.
I have a salt and pepper two-year-old cat, "Tronchaditas". Her name it's strange, but I love her as if she were my sister. I pay attention to her everytime she needs it and she is always ready to love me when I'm sad. One time, she ran away because she loves chasing birds and insects and she saw one of them on my balcony. She jumped outside and was out for one night on the street. The following day, she appeared in front of my house. I think she missed me and she found the way to come back home. She is a clever cat.

In conclusion to what I have written, animals are considerate and kind with people, and we have to do the same with them.

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