I want to learn English because I think that it is an important language. 

I also want to learn English because I'm studying International Business. 

The English language is difficult for me. I need more fluency and to learn more vocabulary.

I hope to speak in English.

The preposition are difficult for me.

I'm studying an English course, but it's difficult for me.

why i want learning english

I want to learn english because i think is an importante important lenguage.
I need learning also because i'm studying internacional bussines.
The eanglish is difficult for me,i need fluncy and learn more vocabulary.
I hope speak english.
Oh!! The preposición isla difficult for me.
Also i'm studying a english curse,but it's difficult for me.

Why I want to learn english:

I want to learn english because I think it is an important language.

I need to learn this language because I am studying international business.

English is difficult for me, however I still need to acheive fluency and learn more vocabulary.

I hope to speak english.

Oh! Prepositions are difficult for me.

I am also taking a english course, but it is difficult for me.

Verdaderamente, ingles es un idioma muy importante si estas interesada en negocios internacionales (asi como espanol).  En vez de "english is difficult for me" puedes tratar de decir "I find english very difficult." Es de igual manera que "me cuesta mucho aprender ingles."  En ingles se suele decir "taking a class/course ( I am taking a class/course)" La palabra "class" es bastante comun aqui en Los Estados Unidos.  Buena suerte!

Why do I want to learning English?

I want to learn English because I think, it is a very importante important language (around the world).
Also, I need to learning also because I'm studying International Business.
The eaEnglish is difficult language to me, I need to speak fluently and learn more vocabulary.
I hope to improve my speak English.
Oh!! The prepositions are preposición isla difficult to me.
Also (Finally), I'm attending an studying a English course, but it's still difficult to me.

Good job!

Why I want to learn English

I want to learn English because I think it is an importante important language.
I need to learning it also because I'm studying international bussiness.
The Eanglish is difficult for me. I need fluncy and to learn more vocabulary.
I hope to speak English.
Oh!! The Prepositions isla are difficult for me.
Also I'm studying an English course, but it's difficult for me.

Buen trabajo con este ejercicio. Recuerde que el "cion" en español es "tion" en ingles (por ejemplo internacional --> international). 

why i want learning english

*Why I want to learn English
((Always capitalize the first letter of a language's name. For example, Spanish, French, Portuguese, English, etc.)) 

...i think is an importante important lenguage.

*I think it is an importante language.
(("I" as in "I think, I am" etc. is always capitalized. Also, you don't need an "e" at the end of important.)) 

I need learning also because i'm studying internacional bussines.
*I also need to learn English because I'm studying international business.
*Another reason I need to learn English is because I am studying international business.


The eanglish is difficult for me,i need fluncy and learn more vocabulary.

*The English is difficult for me because I am trying to become fluent and learn more vocabulary words.

*The English is difficult for me because I need to reach fluency and develop my English vocabulary.

*The English language is difficult for me because I am trying to achieve fluency and improve my vocabulary.

((You can say "English" or you can say "the English language," but never say "the English" when you are talking about the language. You say "the English" when you are talking about the people. For example, "The English like to drink tea," or "The English bravely fought in World War II."))

I hope speak english.

*I hope I will learn to speak English.

*I hope I will speak English one day.

Also i'm studying a english curse,but it's difficult for me.

*Also, I'm taking an English course, but it's difficult for me.

Good job, Jocelyn! This is an excellent start! Let me know if you have any questions. :-)