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Willow's notebook entry: Dec 08, 2010 I am a girl with a strong mind.I don't like and seldom cry in front of others no matter what kind of difficulty I met.I'v been always consider crying as an expression of weakness.Every day I try to be a person without sorrow and sadness,actually, I just hide them.But recently,I found I am tired of this kind of life.I become more and more sentimental,easily to burst into tears.Last Sunday,I went to the church with my friend.I haven't been there for a long time,so I felt so sinful when I just got there.I pray God for forgiveness quietly,but when I heard the hymn,I just can't help crying,even cannot stop...After I came out of the church I began to feel good and released. How amazing God is!

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In my opinion, your entry should be:

I am strong-minded girl.I don't like and seldom cry ( can't say like that cause like+Ving while seldom+ìninitive) in front of others no matter what kind of difficulty I met i don't like being caught crying by other people no matter what happened so seldom do i cry in front of others.I'v been always considered crying as an expression of weakness.Every day I try to be a person without sorrow and sadness,actually, I just hide them.But recently,I found I am tired of this kind of life.I become more and more sentimental,easily to burst into tears easily.Last Sunday,I went to the church with my friend.I haven't been there for a long time,so I felt so sinful when I just got there.I pray God for forgiveness quietly,but when I heard the hymn,I just can't help crying,even cannot stop( the tense of verb is confused here but i love this entry, anyway )...After I came out of the church I began to feel good and released. How amazing God is!
r u Christian? i sometime blame the Christ for everything i couldn't do but i'll alway find him on my distressful moments.
P/s: ah, one more thing, Merry Christmast, have u prepared the Noel pine yet? :">
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happiness and sorrow exist together,that's life ,girl! u r so independent and brave with sunshining look! come on, everyting u do will have a good result!so let your life colorful!
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在我想来，不管看起来如何坚强的女孩，心底总有柔弱之处。
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God bless you.Though I am a Buddhist. Crying is just a way of emotional relief, not reflection of cowardice. Never mind. Be a real yourself.

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