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A great adventure I just graduated from my university and got my bachelor degree. I have a plan to finish, that is traveling to some other country; therefore, I will go to Australia this summer with a working holiday visa. I have not been to other country before, so i am quite nervous but excited as well. I would like to improve myself in two parts. First, I want to enhance my English competence, so that I can be more fluent. Second, I hope i can become a better person through living in a totally different place; in other words, i want to train myself becoming a person that can embrace any difficult situation. After staying in Australia for one year, i would probably visit Spain, because I want to learn Spanish which is a very fascinating language. This is my travel plan, How about yours?? ^^

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A great adventure

I just graduated from my university and got my bachelor degree. I have a plan (to finish), that is I want to go traveling to some other country; therefore, I will go to Australia this summer with a working holiday visa. I have not been to another country before, so i am quite nervous but excited as well. I would like to improve two aspects of myself in two parts. First of all, I want to enhance my English competence competencies (skills sounds better), so that I can be more fluent. Secondly, I hope i can become a better person through living in a totally different place; in other words, i want to train myself to becoming a person that can embrace any difficult situations. After staying in Australia for one year, i would will probably visit Spain, because I want to learn Spanish, which is a very fascinating language. This These is (are) my travel plans, How about yours?? ^^

 

Hey great to know you're coming to Australia! Best country in the world! i live here! :) Don't worry we're all really nice :p 

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A great adventure

I just graduated from my university and got my bachelor degree. I have a plan (I would like) to finish, that is traveling to some other country; so, I will go to Australia this summer with a working holiday visa. I have not been to another country before, so i am quite nervous but excited as well. I would like to improve myself in two ways. First, I want to enhance my English competency so that I can be more fluent. Second, I hope i can become a better person through living in a totally different place; in other words, i want to train myself to be a person that can embrace any difficult situation. After staying in Australia for one year, i will probably visit Spain, because I want to learn Spanish which is a very fascinating language. This is my travel plan. How about yours?? ^^

 

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I hope to travel again to Israel someday and I would also like to take my wife to Germany and the UK. Keep up the good practice.

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