Report From A Fruit Farm

The essay was written as an exercise on the past tenses.

Good afternoon.

This is a the two o'clock news on PR radio. A report just in from Gedera City in the south of Israel. A fruit farm has been was devastated by civil visitors on the last Saturday. As well as destruction destroying some same of the fruit trees, all the fruit was stolen  been taken away.

The devastation was caused by citizens, who were mad about fresh fruits. There have They came come to the farm with their children and have collected all of the ripe fruit. A million of A lot of fruits has been was eaten in the field, and a bit was taken away.

Farmers are looking forward to seeing the next crop on the next week.

Report From A Fruit Farm

The essay was written as an exercise the past tenses. a past tense exercise ( I would say it like that)

Good afternoon.

This is a two o'clock news on PR radio. A report just ( did u mean that this just happened in that specific place?) in Gedera City in the south of Israel. A fruit farm has been was devastated by civil visitors on the last Saturday. As well as the destruction same of fruit trees, all the fruit was been taken away.

The devastation was caused by citizens, who were mad ( when you reffer here to the word mad, do you mean that the citizens were crazy or upset about fresh fruits?) about fresh fruits. There They have come came to the farm with their children and have collected all of the ripe fruit. A million of fruits has were been eaten on the field, and a bit some was  were taken away.

Farmers are looking forward to seeing the next crop, on the next week.

Very interesting essay! It's such a shame that this happened though. I think that when you write something is better to use  Past Tense instead of Present Perfect. Orally speaking is better to use Present Perfect.