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A Nice Day Today the weather was bad and I decided to go to the swimming pool. This is quite near my home, so I went by foot. The square that lies at the front of the pool was packed with kids wearing red, yellow or blue caps. In the middle of the square there was even a podium. That was very unusual. I supposed that there was a party for the young swimmers. I was worried, that the pool today was not available for normal swimmers (that is, for people who swim without reservation). I came across a young man, whom I knew only by sight. He was in a good mood since he was smiling to a girl. He confirmed me that a party has just begun for the children who had just completed a basic swimming course and he told me also that anybody could enter the building. I passed through tables bearing snacks and cakes and among kids and their parents. I paid at the counter and then I put on my swimming trunks. As I was walking through the gate from the locker room to the pool, I noticed that only three people were swimming inside the whole pool and that the air was particularly fresh because big windows had been wide open. I could swim inside a lane that was all for me, so the condition was perfect for a good training. It has been a nice day finally. Thanks for your correction.

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A Nice Day

Today the weather was bad, but I decided to go to the swimming pool. The pool is near my home, so I went by foot. The square that lies at the front of the pool was packed with kids wearing red, yellow, and blue caps. In the middle of the square, there was a podium. That was very unusual. I thought that there was a party for the young swimmers. I was worried that the pool was not available today for normal swimmers (that is, for people who swim without reservation). I came across a young man, whom I knew only by sight. He was in a good mood since he was smiling at a girl. He confirmed to me that a party had just begun for the children who had just completed a basic swimming course, and told me that anybody could enter the building. I passed through tables bearing snacks and cakes among kids and their parents. I paid at the counter, and then I put on my swimming trunks. As I was walking through the gate from the locker room to the pool, I noticed that only three people were swimming inside the whole pool and that the air was particularly fresh because the big windows had been opened wide. I could swim inside a lane by myself, which was perfect for a good training. It was finally a nice day.

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