Diary #2

Today I chat chatted with a friends "a friend", "friends" or "a group of friends" who didn't contact with me for two years. He told me that he likes my English pronunciation.But i , but I think my English listening and speaking is really bad. I am very shy to chat with my foreign friends. I can teach them Chinese confidently, but I always feel embarrased to speak English.Especial , especially chatting with Andy. We have chatted in Chinese and also spoken Chinese when we video chat. He is a American. He alway always laughs when I speak English.Because , because it is very different from I me speaking Chinese.

There are six exams for two weeks. I will be not avialiable available. Too much work to do. I am also glad there are two months for the Summer summer holiday! I kind of want to travel with my friends, but I can't. I plan to study English hard on vacation. More There are more and more subjects I want to learn. I don't have enough time to study all subjects, I just study English first! It is very important for my life. I find found a good way to study English better. I will write more different sentence structures on in my diaries.

Good job, Amber. Everything was easy to understand. I only corrected the mistakes that needed correcting. There are some changes that can be made to make it better which I am sure other people will show you. When you use punctuation, remember to add a space afterwards. Also, you used "holiday" and "vacation" - I'm not sure if both these words would be used together. I think it's mixing British English and American English together.

Diary #2

Today I chatted with a friends who I hadn't spoken to didn't contact with me for two years. He told me that he likes my English pronunciation. But I think my English listening and speaking is really bad. I am very shy to when I chat with my foreign friends. I can teach them Chinese with confidence confidently,but I always feel embarrased to speak English. Especially chatting with Andy. We have chatted in Chinese and also spoken Chinese when we video. He is an American. He alway laughs when I speak English. because it is very different from when I speaking Chinese.

There are I have six exams for over two weeks. I will be not avialiable. There is too much work to do. I am also glad there are two months for the summer holiday! I kind of want to travel with my friends, but I can't. I plan to study English hard on during my vacation. I want to learn many More and more subjects I want to learn.I don't have enough time to study all the subjects, I just study English first! It is very important for my life. I have found a better find a good way to study English better.I will write more different sentence structures in my diaries.

Please note that there is a space after the use of a comma and a full stop.