Hello people around the world!!

I often think how people are happy when they are born with some vivid talent. Many people determine their talents from childhood and start to develop them, whereas others try to find their ability during (a better word would be "throughout") their whole life and some people find their talent in the end, but the others can't find any talent and ability during their life. Although I agree with the idea that each person is good at something, and everyone has talent in something, but it's not fair because one person gets things easier than others. I understand that is life. People are born not equal ("born unequal" or "not born equal") ....

I don't know why I wrote about this but I would like to know how you assess my ability of expressing my thoughts in English?
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Well done Ariana, this is well written with only minor mistakes - good job!