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Hello everyone .Iam chinese .I am a rookie in here .I want to improve my English level and make many friends around the worlld.Certainly ,I can teach you Mandarin .Please pay attention me.thank you.
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Hello!
Hello everyone. I am Chinese. I am a rookie here. I want to improve my English, and make many friends around the world. I can teach you Mandarin. Please pay attention to me. Thank you.
The phrase "I am a rookie here" is awkward, so I suggest saying "I am new here". Next time!
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Hello
Hello everyone .Iam Chinese .I am a rookie in here .I want to improve my English level and make many friends around the worlld.Certainly ,I can teach you Mandarin .Please pay attention me.Thank you.
Please note that there is no space between a word and a full stop or a comma. There is a space after the use of a full stop and comma.
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