An Embarrassing Thing

  One day, there it were was just Yan and me I in our dormitory. We were reviewing our textbooks for the up coming examinations.
   Suddenly, Yan said, "I just read a funny joke" and he told the story of how two frogs fell in love and got married and gave birth to a toad. The male frog was white with fury and said 'what the hell, bitch?' The female frog cried terribly, 'I'm so sorry darling. I had cosmetic surgery before we married.' Hahahaha……" 
      I didn't think this joke was funny because I had seen it before, but in order to avoid an awkward situation, I cooperated with a laugh, "Hehehe, it' so funny." << Perfect Punctuation!!!
She said, "I saw this joke in my QQ zone, hahahaha……" (What is a QQ zone?)
I laughed reluctantly and replied/said, "Had cosmetic surgery? That's pretty comical!"
Then, she said, "Hey, wait a moment." Then She came up to me putting and put her mobile phone to her ear, and asked me, "Amy, what are you talking about? What did you just say?" "…………”
    I came to realize that she was not talking to me, but to her boyfriend by  on her mobile phone. ('Cell phone', 'mobile' , or 'phone' also works)

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Hahaha that's hilarious I do that so many times its rediculous. They look right at you and then you find out they're taling through their ear buds.

 Awesome job, you're getting a lot better! I think you should work a little bit more on punctuation skills ()[] " " ' ' . <<those but the rest is rather understandable!!

-When 'just' is used in this context it makes people sound as if they are upset
-For stories you would not want to keep it in quotes the whole time, it can be really confusing. So thats why I took it out of quotes.
-Make an indintation so it helps the reader understand where the story actually ends ^_^

Feel free to ask me any questions as usual ;) 

Is this the where the joke came from??      goo.gl/bHV91g