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Hi Alice,
I´m writing to tell you a TV company came to my school yesterday.
This TV company has chosen my school because my classmate has won a very important competition. This competition was about a math quiz and there are a lot of children participated here. She was the second winner.
The TV company want to film the school because they want to show in the programme where my classmate is studying.
All my classmates are very nervous because they are very shy and they won´t what say if they had to talk.
I think the programme will be shown on television next week but I don´t sure. I will tell you it when I know it.
I hope your answer soon.
Best wishes,
Teresa.
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Hi Alice,
I´m writing to tell you that a television company came to my school yesterday. This company had chosen my school because one of my classmates won an important competition. This competition was a math quiz, and a lot of children participated. She won second place. The company wanted to film the school because they wanted to show where my classmate is studying. All of my classmates were nervous because they are shy and they didn't know what say if they had to talk. I think the program might be broadcast next week, but I'm not sure. I will tell you it when I know. Please write back soon.
Best wishes,
Teresa.
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