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A terrible night Last night was a terrible night to me,I got hurt bitterly.A girl rejected me,for she couldn't enjoy a exciting feeling with me when we kissed. We've known each other since I entered this company,she is a smart and sunny girl,fascinating me so much.I like to chat with her,and I was deeply trapped by her smiling face,which probably I would never forget all my life. I hate the fact that I've lost her ,I drank much Chinese drink last night,but could not stop me thinking of her and the happy days spent with her. Today,I worked like a robot,when passing her office,how I wish she could give me a warm smile like before.But I got nothing but nothing. It's time to say goodbye to this relationship.Life continues ,Good like,girl.

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A terrible night

Last night was a terrible night for me. I got hurt badly.  A girl rejected me because she said she didn't feel any electricity when we kissed.


We've known each other since I started with this company. She is a smart and sunny girl and I am completely fascinated with her. I like to chat with her,and am totally captivated by her smiling face, which probably I will probably never forget as long as I live.


I hate the fact that I've lost her. I drank loads of Chinese wine/spirits last night, but could not stop myself thinking about her and the happy days spent with her.


Today,I worked like a robot.  When passing her office, how I wished she would give me a warm smile like before. But I got nothing; absolutely nothing.


It's time to say goodbye to this relationship. Life goes on. Good like,girl. (Not sure what you mean by this end bit).


You are young.  You are probably going to go through this with a number of women during your lifetime and each time it will suck.  However, those of us who are a bit older and wiser can assure you that this is not the end of the world.  She may have done you a favour by telling you straight away that she isn't interested in you in a romantic way as now you know not to waste any more time on trying to make her your girlfriend and move on to someone more suitable.


We have a number of sayings in English which apply to this situation. Here's two:


There are plenty more fish in the sea. (She is not the only girl in the world)

As one door closes, another opens. (The fact that she has turned you down opens the way for another possibly far more suitable girl to come into your life).



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